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Dekol347
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Good job there author! Ive been waiting long enough for decent football managerial novel like football dynasty and godfather of champions. Your storytelling were detail and immersive, I can easily imagine what happen in the field and what tactical change were made. I just hope that this novel doesnt go hiatus. And Im think that if you make 1 match spent 5-7 chapters its gonna be boring and awful, because we must wait a week for the match to end and the change of phase will be very long that people maybe will leave this novel. I think that you should shorten the match and focus on Kai development. Last from me, are you gonna make this novel like football dynasty where you will future superstar before they snatched by big club? Or you just focus on tactical side? Thanks author!

Football: Passion Unkindled

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SaltyPineapple
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thanks for the feedback. Yeah, i kinda realised the matches was too long after writing for a while. Gonna be fixed from chapter 30 onwards

Dekol347
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Well I dont mind it if you can upload 10 chapters a week hahaha. Its because we must wait for 2 weeks for a match to end that makes it unbearable.

SaltyPineapple:thanks for the feedback. Yeah, i kinda realised the matches was too long after writing for a while. Gonna be fixed from chapter 30 onwards