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Senpai_God
Senpai_GodLv32yrSenpai_God

This novel is pretty much exactly what i have been looking for. The mc is a young girl who is percieved as very beautiful and intellegent, she is also quite calm and collected and is able to think rationally in most situations. She has a sister who at first appears to be a totall dickhead but deep inside cares for our mc. She ends up saving a wolf that i assume isn’t a normal wolf because of the way it acts and looks. I’m very intrigued to see what will happen next tho. There is quite a few grammar mistakes and i don’t think English is the authors main language but i could be wrong, you should reread the first few chapters and edit your mistakes. There is only 15 chapters so i’m not able to give a full review, i’ll come back and update this when more chapters are released. And on that note, PLS RELEASE MORE CHAPTERS OR I WILL CRY :(

Bloody Paws

Sashae4l

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Thank you for your honest review i really appreciated it. And you were right English is not my first language.

Senpai_God
Senpai_GodLv3Senpai_God

it's honestly not that bad considering it isn't your first language. The flow is quite good and it's easy to read. Most problems are in your sentence structure where you either miss a dot or use the wrong tempus for a verb. Other than that, great work! I like how you made the main character a beautiful girl, I'm tired of reading novels with a main character that looks average.

Sashae4l:Thank you for your honest review i really appreciated it. And you were right English is not my first language.