Review Detail of Zarathos_Lirbyther in Re: Evolution Online

Cap 22 currently The ideas presented so far and the story itself were very good, however, if it had been at a slightly slower pace it would have been perfect. Because, like, all this happened in one day? The author rushed a lot of things, like Ray managing to withdraw seemingly out of nowhere 500 gold coins. (I know it's possible to convert with real-world money, but how would they know to do that before an hour into the game?) Well, I'll keep reading and updating my review.