Review Detail of Bit_Lucky in The Devilish Charm of the alpha

The story is actually really great besides that one sentence that sounded like her whole world was fake in the first chapter. It seemed like the the story wasn't 1st POV but if your going for the 3rd POV that's fine. It think it would be better in 1st person since most stories are like that and we would readers would get a deeper feelings for the MC