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Review Detail of Totentanz in The-E.N.D-King-And-The-Lost-Throne

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The overall writing quality is undeniable good, there is some typo here and there but not something can ruin your experience. The highlight of the novel is First-person type of writing with the thought of the MC appear here and there. The positive side is It help to create the character of MC really quickly and give some comedic effect with those "untold words", but also had clear down side, sometime it will interrupt the flow of the plot and conversation. Constant switching between what MC "heard" and "Think" also sometime hard to catch up, if not getting used to it. As other slow-phased novel, the biggest trouble of this book are rather slow character build up and plot line. The world building are completed in first couple chapter, but the plotline(or main target of MC) are yet to appear . Other issue are the characteristic of side-character is weaker compare to the MC. However it just a common problem for these kind of novel. As long as more backstory about character revealed and the story moved forward, this novel could reach a higher peak

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The-E.N.D-King-And-The-Lost-Throne

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Thanks, I will try harder to make the story interesting.