Review Detail of Pclerk in MARVEL: GAMER PATH

The spelling, grammar, and syntax are not perfect but good and easily read. No current updates but previously not bad. The story development overall isn’t bad but it feels rushed. Later chapters feel as though there are a lot of filler moments. The characters are not to bad at the start but feel as though they lose some dimension as the story progresses. Mc comes off as having the mental capacity of a 12 year old child. The breakdown of the world is horrendous. There are no descriptions of the world past some initial values. Everything after that isn’t given any details. The story isn’t a bad time filler but has room for improvement.