Review Detail of larny_craft in tensura reborn

I only ask that you keep trying, don't let the writing fall, it may be that at certain times you get stressed and the comments won't help, at some point you're going to screw it up, but keep trying, every effort pays off. I have seen very few tension fan fiction tension fan fiction, of which I can rescue very little, but you should always try to improve and give surprises, plot twists and those things, or the reading can become boring and super monotonous. And as I have been saying, do your best and I wish you the best (I don't know how well this is translated since I speak Spanish)