Review Detail of Toxic_318 in In Naruto: I'm Invincible who sacrifices EQ.

The concept was interesting but not explained clearly. The writing quality was surprisingly good, better than many of the novels out there. The stability of updates, well, this is dropped so there's nothing to say. However, the rest of the aspects are quite lacking. It felt more like a wish fulfillment rather than an actual fanfic. There's no logic whatsoever and things happen because the author wanted it to happen, not because of other events causing a chain reaction. In other words, the author just writes whatever he/she wants and the story spins out the way he wanted without taking account into the logic and reasoning of the work. If you still don't get it, let me give you an example. Harry Potter fanfic, let's say that there's an extremely talented mc showing his talent of Albus Dumbledore and Albus does not doubt him or try to test if the mc is on the side of the "light". This is illogical, and out of character. But it still happened, because the author wanted it to be that way.