Review Detail of WhiteVest in Where it all went wrong?

had to leave a reveiw... this was super well written and I have to point that out. most authors on WN don't care enough to write a really amazing peice of literature but this author did, and i have to comment that. as for the story, great fling story, the MC is a bit emotional and reactionary but aren't we all? it's very human and very real and I love it.