I don't understand reincarnated ones who lose their memory of the world they know is essential for their or their group/family's survival, did he have any traumatic problem that led to amnesia? So why just a reincarnated one? Why not take an OC and explore your creativity?
Quade_The_Unknown
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LIKEIf someone has to read the first 20 chapters of your story to get hooked into it, your story is wrong.
Quade_The_Unknown:How far have you read into it? Just the first 2, or the 20 that have been released when this has been reviewed