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Why? Let thEre romance and haErm of like 3Girlz one human ,elf and a dragon

why 😭😭😭

bro this just some suggestions perhaps if u want to write another novel slow pace like this, try changing pov, and improve conversation between character. or if u want to improve ur skill at that try rewrite some funny conversation u had. cheer's [img=recommend]

Thanks man.

question why are the later chapters locked??? just a question about the fan-fic before i read also had this saved since you started uploading just forgot all about it lol their are so many fan-fics to read nowadays.

You use grammerly and paraphrasin g tool man the story is good and all bit the wording is killing the exp erience man anyway good job i finished all the chapter in one day

Pardon my grammar

This is a suggestion on my path. If you can afford an editor, it would be better, because the pov of the story is a little of and gives little to no enjoyment to the reader. Anyway good job

Actually, I don't know how to appoint a editor. Don't worry I will try appoint a editor. thanks for the support.

please correct the misspellings...it's irritating.. even though story is good I lost my interest

If this jovel has romance/harem I would start reading it?

And i would stop reading it

Nice 👌

Why does Sam spend so much time doing personal hygiene? The guy must shower three plus times a day. It distracts from the story having to read about how he "freshens up" three or more times a chapter.

Can I make a suggestion? When he checks his status, stop showing the whole lot, it's highly annoying reading it constantly. Very repetitive. One chapter I read, 3/4 of the whole chapter was just status. You can do better than this

First few chapters don't feel like a novel feels like a description 😕

I liked the novel very much up until the protagonist chose to change their weapon of choice to a "BOW". THE SWORD WAS ALREADY PRETTY DECENT

why his goal is to protect a bunch of strangers he just met, its quite stupid would've been better if he wanted to save himself or just wanted to become strong but you made him a bodyguard after he transmigrated very very stupid chapter