Review Detail of Zogofrodo in Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Item: Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
Rating: 3.8

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ZogofrodoLv152yrZogofrodo

Tbh author has a problem with long monologues, an entire chapter of a guy just explaining the history of a place shouldnt be a chapter. There are so many ways of explaining things and introducing lore without it being an entire chapter of absolutely no actual progress.

Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

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Ancient_Demon_Lv4Ancient_Demon_

I agree! the long monologues makes it so boring to read sometimes, its ok if it only happened for a little but heh its always there and in every chapter there is always long explanation about some things it's like many explanations less actions, i cant explain it properly

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