Review Detail of silent_walker in Chaos Cycle: The Eye of Genesis
Review detail
This is a re-review and one with some honesty. First of all the story turned into something else than I intended, and it was actually worse in some parts than my first. I made the mc edgy for the sake of him being edgy. Elior is almost a character without flaws but I made him somewhat a hypocrite intentionally. The worldbuilding was dull, and honestly, I have saved up a few things for later parts. which turned out to be a bad decision. The writing quality is poor, and you will expect a lot of typos. If you don't fear it then feel free to continue. As for the story development and plot, it is above average with a few nice fight scenes, here and there. and the main idea of the book is pretty good. Like my other book, this one got its voice in the chapter 70s. Honestly, I still think the book is better than many on this site with all those flaws. Continue if you like and leave behind comments.
Chaos Cycle: The Eye of Genesis
silent_walker
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I liked it a bit the plot remind me of EER,Novels extra,second coming of gluttony although written in a objective like manner. Many details are unnecessary info and comedy is kind of lame. I hope you can make it a immersive story and be more subtle in the world building. Nonetheless it is an interesting story.Keep up the great job
silent_walker:he's calm, smart and stupid at the same time, and also, a bit suicidal prone.
Still a good read. I think you’ve created a character with a really interesting and complex moral compass and it’s pretty cool how unique he is. There are some typos, sure, but I think you’re looking at it a bit TOO objectively. Regardless of the points you made it’s still fun to read, but I’m not one to criticize the author himself as I am only a reader.