webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of EverGreen in The Rebirth of The Ancient Sword Sovereign

Review detail

EverGreen
EverGreenAuthor2yrEverGreen

I know my grammar is technically terrible but i will do my best to improve . I hope you will like the novel . if you will have any suggestions or comments don't be shy to share ... @Evergreen

altalt

The Rebirth of The Ancient Sword Sovereign

EverGreen

Liked by 21 people

LIKE

Replies9

L65haja
L65hajaLv1L65haja

Keep Going !

Yuva_Latre
Yuva_LatreLv1Yuva_Latre

Don't stop

its_L
its_LLv3its_L

so is this harem?

Ashtarot
AshtarotLv4Ashtarot

i hope not

its_L:so is this harem?
ThePreceptor
ThePreceptorLv4ThePreceptor

The names of the Cultivation Realms are not specific. You should capitalize the beginnings of names of weapons, rewards, skills, places, and the like. I can also help you edit it if you want. The storyline is good. Well done.

ShadowWind
ShadowWindLv15ShadowWind

Interesting story. However, grammar and consistency with cultivation realms, character names and pretty much everything is really really bad. Do you plan to rewrite from the beginning? I’m 70 chapters in and it’s very frustrating trying to figure out what’s happening with all of the inconsistencies. I’ll probably drop this and hopefully things get better and try to revisit later down the road.

kv_singh_1347
kv_singh_1347Lv4kv_singh_1347

The Novel's name doesn't match with the story.

Eternalsylph
EternalsylphLv13Eternalsylph

pls no harem stop sword cultivation novels with harem

MisTeR_BaTH
MisTeR_BaTHLv3MisTeR_BaTH

is there romance for our mc?