Review Detail of Sunny_Shad0w in The Prince Of The Elves

The Sun Elves really had me intrigued, would love to learn more about this race later via carvings, ruins or other implications. Sometimes after chapter 1 I thought it was a time loop, but then I realized it was just straight up amnesia the second chapter. The details and imagery are outstanding, but dialogue needs some work in few parts. I believe you should add "..." to give out dramatic pauses in serious events, so it doesn't feel all too lucky. Other than that, this novel is great!