Review Detail of Jacksonville_ in Fantasy Air
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Even if it takes days, months or years I will keep checking if there's a new chapter! Anyway great story, the thing I enjoy the most is Isabelle's inner conflict. Every character has decent complexity(there's only 34 ch so it's really surprising) and a plot that unfortunately as for now isn't totally explained but at the same time understandable at this point into the story.
Fantasy Air
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Thank you! I am glad I resumed writing, all thanks to you and the readers who come back to read my story. I am still a newbie writer but I will stive to write better stories. And yes, the earlier chapters might have a vague plot because I wrote them on a whim. But I have planned latter parts of the story. I hope I can plan a more detailed as I keep writing.