Review Detail of Guiltythree in Hvisland: A VR Colony Sim Game

After reading the first few chapters, I can say that there's only one big flaw in this novel: there's not enough of it yet! :) The premise is original and has the potential to deliver tons of fun. The writing is great, the characters are compelling and interesting, and the protagonist has a very humorous personality. What I appreciate the most is that every colonist has a flaw that makes their future intriguing, especially Kat with her impeccable flat face-fu. Then, as a former gamer myself, I can't help to appreciate the "Permadeath" setting. As gamers know, the most unforgiving games are the most exciting ones! This one detail gives the story stakes and makes you appreciate every moment so much more. Overall, I'll be adding this book to my library and definitely returning to it when there are more chapters available. Great job, author!