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Review Detail of KingPablo in Love or Truth

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KingPabloLv31yrKingPablo

Story wise I think it is really good but a bit predictable. There is a nice flow but the grammar needs some work. This has the potential for some intense drama. The main thing lacking is just experience as a writer but you have got the skill for it, so I know as you keep on writing you are just going to get better and better.👍🏿✌🏿

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Love or Truth

prettygirl_93

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prettygirl_93
prettygirl_93Authorprettygirl_93

thank you ..yes, you are right I may lack the potential of a writer as this is my official first novel..but I will continue writing... hope I will improve 🙂

KingPablo
KingPabloLv3KingPablo

You don't lack the potential dear. You have already started the first step. Keep it on👍🏿