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ArcaneWriter
ArcaneWriterAuthor2yrArcaneWriter

Hello, Author of this little story here. If you want to complain about anything, I will read all replies to this. If you think you have any good advice/ideas you want to share, reply to this and I will answer. Tell me about how the story is going and if you want to see changes in my way of writing and the reasons... To help me improve. I welcome criticism to become better but please refrain from cursing and flaming etc. Let's write this together and make it one epic fanfic. :) Thank you and good luck.

Gene Manipulation

ArcaneWriter

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Philip_vagnerbohrn
Philip_vagnerbohrnLv1Philip_vagnerbohrn

Will it become an mc x harem cuz... please don't do it!

ahmed_ghazy
ahmed_ghazyLv3ahmed_ghazy

it's a good idea you can make him 1- get red of genetic defects and impurities 2- increase talent in accordance with chakra (the more chakra the more talented)forming a loop 3- increase thinking and comprehension speed as he grows stronger (it's difficult to increase in most novels) 4- create super powers (purification_ cell refining and acceptance of all types of energy....) 5- all elements affinity (đŸ”„+wood+wind +water+earth+yin+Yang+lightning+dark+light+space+time.......) 6-increase senses+instinct 7-make refining of chakra not just dependent on food but also all types of energy available if he ever world travels it won't limit him

ahmed_ghazy
ahmed_ghazyLv3ahmed_ghazy

purification power + energy refining =no turning to stone +pure body(as in marrow cleansing) +pure energy +increased potential

ArcaneWriter
ArcaneWriterAuthorArcaneWriter

Thank you.

ahmed_ghazy:purification power + energy refining =no turning to stone +pure body(as in marrow cleansing) +pure energy +increased potential
ahmed_ghazy
ahmed_ghazyLv3ahmed_ghazy

you're welcome

Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15Swiftescape

No romance please. Also I would like to know if this is evil mc or not. Having a gene manipulation power with an evil mc? The possibilities are endless!

ArcaneWriter
ArcaneWriterAuthorArcaneWriter

Evil is subjective, it depends on the view of others, Towards his enemies sure. His friends, no. Evil depends on who is defining it. For example, Minato. Toward hidden rock, he is evil. Toward Konoha he is a hero. It all depends on the perspective. Get it? If you mean selfish or selfless, I would say a little bit of both depending on the situation.

Swiftescape:No romance please. Also I would like to know if this is evil mc or not. Having a gene manipulation power with an evil mc? The possibilities are endless!
Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15Swiftescape

So it's not evil mc then, just another anti-hero. Why write so much? Just be clear and say yes or no. Welp thanks for letting me know anyway.

ArcaneWriter:Evil is subjective, it depends on the view of others, Towards his enemies sure. His friends, no. Evil depends on who is defining it. For example, Minato. Toward hidden rock, he is evil. Toward Konoha he is a hero. It all depends on the perspective. Get it? If you mean selfish or selfless, I would say a little bit of both depending on the situation.
Kile
KileLv15Kile

evil is definitely not subjective. minato was fighting in a war that his village didn’t even want and took action to end it, the hidden rock didnt think he was evil their pride was hurt. you either are evil or you aren’t

ArcaneWriter
ArcaneWriterAuthorArcaneWriter

Let’s say someone murders 10000 people in a very brutal way, me and you and everyone we know included. But later we find out after death its because he needed 10000 human hearts to save his brother or something. Is he evil or not? The prople who have been murdered will see him as evil at worst, misguided at best. from an outside perspective, he will seem to be in a very difficult situation and for him and his brother, it is only natural he do anything for family. So I think there is no evil unless you are talking about mentally sick people, some can be considered evil. In healthy people evil is not a thing. I think? It’s not so simple, humans are more complex than saying someone is evil or not, there is no absolute.

Kile:evil is definitely not subjective. minato was fighting in a war that his village didn’t even want and took action to end it, the hidden rock didnt think he was evil their pride was hurt. you either are evil or you aren’t
Kile
KileLv15Kile

the goal does not define the action the action defines the action. that would be selfish and evil. he would recognize that, his brother would recognize that and we would recognize that

ArcaneWriter:Let’s say someone murders 10000 people in a very brutal way, me and you and everyone we know included. But later we find out after death its because he needed 10000 human hearts to save his brother or something. Is he evil or not? The prople who have been murdered will see him as evil at worst, misguided at best. from an outside perspective, he will seem to be in a very difficult situation and for him and his brother, it is only natural he do anything for family. So I think there is no evil unless you are talking about mentally sick people, some can be considered evil. In healthy people evil is not a thing. I think? It’s not so simple, humans are more complex than saying someone is evil or not, there is no absolute.
HaracasAye
HaracasAyeLv4HaracasAye

wat readers are asking here is about his moral allignment not how his actions are perceived by others.

ArcaneWriter:Let’s say someone murders 10000 people in a very brutal way, me and you and everyone we know included. But later we find out after death its because he needed 10000 human hearts to save his brother or something. Is he evil or not? The prople who have been murdered will see him as evil at worst, misguided at best. from an outside perspective, he will seem to be in a very difficult situation and for him and his brother, it is only natural he do anything for family. So I think there is no evil unless you are talking about mentally sick people, some can be considered evil. In healthy people evil is not a thing. I think? It’s not so simple, humans are more complex than saying someone is evil or not, there is no absolute.
ahmed_ghazy
ahmed_ghazyLv3ahmed_ghazy

_bro you can also make the genetic changes have an effect on the soul. _like the relationship between hardware and software. _as in the genetic changes may give birth to soul super powers _like this genetic change(all elements affinity)=soul power change(devouring superpower - or adaptation - or universe soul travel......) _or genetic change (getting rid of DNA impurities and defects)=soul power change (purification superpower)

ahmed_ghazy
ahmed_ghazyLv3ahmed_ghazy

and you can also have the system upgraded to control the soul data after the system is truly his

Eid_zack
Eid_zackLv4Eid_zack

I want update

Justin_McIlwain
Justin_McIlwainLv1Justin_McIlwain

You should write something similar to this because your idea are fantastic, you could possibly write something better then this and I would definitely read it. If you do just make sure you know the original story of Naruto well enough so you can make your own story better

ahmed_ghazy:_bro you can also make the genetic changes have an effect on the soul. _like the relationship between hardware and software. _as in the genetic changes may give birth to soul super powers _like this genetic change(all elements affinity)=soul power change(devouring superpower - or adaptation - or universe soul travel......) _or genetic change (getting rid of DNA impurities and defects)=soul power change (purification superpower)