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The writing quality is very good. There is little to no errors and the back story has a high potential. Although it was sci-fi, there were small interaction moments where it was realistic, and that's good. I did want to say the pace was way too fast for me. And because of this, I feel like I don't know the characters at all. Even the main character felt strange to me. Maybe slow down the pace a little and add some personality to the characters.
THE MEMORY LOST IN SPACE
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I did read til chapter 3. There was little details about the setting so it was hard to imagine where Lorraine was after the marriage.
HONGGSHUAI:Thank you for the review. Could you tell me how much chapter did you read that I should add more details? Prologue is definitely super fast pace I could fix that. I’m wondering whether after prologue is it still too fast or not. Thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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