Carburettor? Really? This is one of the most baffling naming sense I ever encountered. How the other character's names were just fine, and you messed up MC's as inevitably the one to be mentioned the most is a wonder to me. On a side note, the idea is pretty interesting and novel for me. The logic and background of the world you tried to imply was well presented. Though I just got through 60s chapters, the characters development was already taking shape and pretty decent. The story was pretty well paced. The only thing irks me was, again, the MC's name, and you have to write it in its full despicable form every time it was mentioned.
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