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I hated how Dawn's story ended, it cause me to feel physically ill and frustrated. The lack of catharsis from that storyline ruined my entire experience with this story.
Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
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I don't quite know where you are at, but after Dawn goes to college and they begin to proper date, everything appears to be going well with no problems, other than the fact that Dawn has a DP/TP kink, to all of a sudden a reveal that she wasn't rhe character the entire story made her out to be. How she isn't perfect blah blah blah, before she cheats on Ben and leaves him 100% out of the blue, completely going against her entire character that's had been building up the entire story. I haven't really read after that point so I don't know if the author is going to rry and fix it.
can ypu please spoil me what happened to dawn? whom did she end up with ? i have read till the point where dawn came back with a girl and some dude to ben's place from summer-camp after recollecting her feelings. then finnaly rejected her and then she stars dating that dude whom she came with. i only remember this much ..... i dont mind the spoiler. please tell me what's her end.
yeah, just like the author wants to drag her characters development down so he can make the mc more mature and show his more good development to us (Basically, the author changes some good traits from dawn when she was with Ryan, but when she is with ben again, it becomes much different than the nice traits that's she has had)
BoyishVoid:I don't quite know where you are at, but after Dawn goes to college and they begin to proper date, everything appears to be going well with no problems, other than the fact that Dawn has a DP/TP kink, to all of a sudden a reveal that she wasn't rhe character the entire story made her out to be. How she isn't perfect blah blah blah, before she cheats on Ben and leaves him 100% out of the blue, completely going against her entire character that's had been building up the entire story. I haven't really read after that point so I don't know if the author is going to rry and fix it.