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rodrigo_melo
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Ok, the story is good, really good. The characters have their own personality and thoughs, they are really alive. But the problem is the inconcistency, in one chapter they are thinking something and later the are doing the total oposite, which here, in this novel case is not actually bad, because this is development and the characters have their own reasons to do so, but sometimes is too forced and exaggerated. One thing that bugs me is that the story didn't know where to stop, i feel like the chapter 96 is the true ending and i stopped reading there because i jumped the later chapters and what i saw didn't pleased me at all, everything was supposed to end in chapter 96, every arc of each characters was done, the ending was what we wanted and what the author developed since the begnning, but it just... continued, after chapter 96 everything just feels like a filler. Seriously, i wouldn't recommend to people read chapter 96 above. But i overall the story is good and pretty consistent, the MC is not perfect and makes a lot of mistakes and learns from it. Other reason why i stopped at chapter 96 is because of NTR, i could handle till chapter 96 but the later characters are just so... unsatisfactory.

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rodrigo_melo
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the story gets really shitty and repetitive later on... huh, i should've expected, there not much of a decent erotica out there and when i found one I got really excited. but nowadays i this story is just really fucked up, the author is a sick man and should've stopped writing this more than a decade ago.

rodrigo_melo
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Dude posting this materpiece, THANK YOU, this is a great story, i owe you all the power stones i have. But i also hate you, cuz now i hate every other romance novel i used to read because of their poorly writen MC and romance.

horrendous_potato
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I prefer a poorly written MC and romance over a story that repeatedly has the MC get cucked

rodrigo_melo:Dude posting this materpiece, THANK YOU, this is a great story, i owe you all the power stones i have. But i also hate you, cuz now i hate every other romance novel i used to read because of their poorly writen MC and romance.