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I was greatly attracted by the synopsis. I was very excited to know that it's not a vampire or a werewolf, it's a monster. A very unique approach and I love it. The mc has a cliche background, with the unloving parents, runaway dad, perfect stepsister and best friend with the perfect family and boring school. However, the plot allows the novel to stand out regardless of the background. I always appreciate when a novel can be cliche but unique and interesting. There were a few grammatical and punctuation errors but nothing too big to affect the plot or the story. The author could also utilize more of the show and not tell method to bring the readers into their imagination while reading. Overall, this novel has a lot of potential and a golden plot. I wish you all the best with your writing [img=recommend]

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The Mask Of The Monster

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Thank you so much for your review!