Review Detail of IseeShark in Star Wars a reincarnation story

I will try my best to fix that sorry English is not my first language I'm still learning to write it ;-; but!! glad you find the plot interesting I'm originally from Greece so I'm having some issues with English

This last chapter was much better in terms of readability. For the most part the issue with grammar I see here is unique in the sense that there seems to be "sound" errors. Almost like you are speaking the words and a computer is writing them down based on what it sounds like, not how they are spelled. This and the spacing you use. Spacing in text is very important as it allows for the reader to more easily digest the paragraphs. You have a tendency to make large chunks of sentences clump together. This is more difficult to read and is not very nice to look at. Though this aside I am looking forward to seeing where you take the story. :)

I would suggest you use grammarly. And reading through it after editing. It will help a lot. Even then I make some mistakes. But overall chapter quality will be higher.

every time I hear an author's first language is not English. I automatically assume the grammar is so bad. because 9 out of 10 times I read a fanfic or novel. Where that's stated in the synapse. the grammar is usually so unreadable no sentence structure rules were followed. just like how this Asian woman drives in this clip across the road is what most of the time I see authors who state that do across the English language. even worse yet most of these authors never bother to try to rewrite their novels fixing the grammar that they messed up the first time and reposting it. even when people offer to help them out. or beg them to seek help. as they really like to read their story. But they can't because the grammar is so bad.

Yeah i could tell because of the summary having “zaborac” in it :/

how bad is the grammar on a scale of 1 to 10????