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Review Detail of Gortox in The Hidden Noble

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Gortox
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Filled with small mistakes to the point it's glaring right in the face of reader. From the update dates it appears that Author either posted this novel somewhere else before, made a rewrite(unlikely) or wrote for himself and finally decided to try out by posting it here, as such the update are haphazard at best. The background took unnecessarily too long amounting to mostly filler. Story progression makes little sense. Characters are very two dimensional and I might be wrong, but to me a quite a few characters are evil solely for the sake of being such rather than due to some deeper reasoning. The world background seem to be on a backburner as it appears that author is more interested in keeping whatever story he has in mind going full speed rather than slow down and think from the perspective of a third party such as the reader, leaving most of his thoughts about the story and world as simply that - Thoughts!

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