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Review Detail of PrugnaKerai in Life didn't get easier, even in another world.

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It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them. There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.

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Life didn't get easier, even in another world.

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Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. I will try to solve them.