Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in Getting Better With My Other Self

My, this plot is very nice. This novel is capable of being extremely interesting and I can actually see it being adapted into a comic. However, the multiple errors are a huge turnoff. There's more than a few grammatical and punctuation errors. Almost all sentences are without end marks. The synopsis was short and extremely confusing. There's no problem with a short synopsis but the writer has to make it understandable, interesting and intriguing. Going into the novel, some areas were just as confusing since you worded a few things weird. The story flowed but not well. As the reader, I was not really introduced to anything, it was as if the writer expected us to already know most things about the world of the character. Overall, this novel has a very creative plot and the writer's intentions are clear. I hope the author can work on their shortcomings and only get better and better as they write. [img=recommend]