Review Detail of Vincent_Latta in One Piece Starting with Uchiha Itachi's Template
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This novel is actually mad good so far i am entertained i just hope the author doesn't nerf the system because itachi should be much stronger than the author is showing i feel like because if you are telling me itachi is barely as strong as smoker i gotta go not to mention the fact that itachi's abilities were doubled from his prime this is absolutely wild he should not even be close to tired after beating smoker
One Piece Starting with Uchiha Itachi's Template
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No the readers can't understand anything because the only thing you've written is that no matter what he's just a servant, background character who can only do his best at not doing his best. Seriously when you write a fic about pirates with a system and ninja abilities, it might do you a bit if God to understand the things you write about, maybe read the actual stories not fanfics. Because just based off you strengthened Itachi's abilities he basically from chapter 7 on became able to one shot almost ther entire one piece world with just his eye based abilities. tsukuyomi can only be countered by a sharingan period. guess who has the only sharingan available in that world.
theTripleX_HSA:Itachi did not do his best against Smoker, because he did not plan to kill him in the first place and the reader can understand that from the chapters..... Itachi will do his best in his battle with Borsalino Kizaru.
theTripleX_HSA:Itachi did not do his best against Smoker, because he did not plan to kill him in the first place and the reader can understand that from the chapters..... Itachi will do his best in his battle with Borsalino Kizaru.