Review Detail of MysteriaFollower in I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

Webnovel should make something like "Hire an Editor to edit your story" function because fuck me this is worse than reading MTL because when reading mtl you dont really expect anything good with the grammar but is still understandable. here? at least make it understandable ffs, English being your 2nd language should be used as an excuse if you're gonna write a story in english. And you started premium at chapter 20 LOL. Only masochistic freaks would spend their shit on this.