Review Detail of Bad_Thiliono in I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

Okay it mostly boils down to two main issues. 1: The writing is awful. I am referring to grammar and spelling. 2: It premiums at 20 chapters. This limits any insights into most all categories in the review so I defualt to low ratings because in the first twenty chalters nothing is given out which makes this story worth buying more chapters except the genre itself. In fact there is the aforementioned poor writing which makes you think twice about EVER giving the story your money. TL;DR : Dont waste Your time on an early premium story with poor writing unless you have absolutely nothing else to spend fast passes on. 1.8/5