I would say it's a good story except for the fact that the story seems to be written with children with mind... Some people may enjoy these type of work... where mc is dumb asf and a brainless fool... yes need growth time and what not but bro first think of the setup he has then say he needs growth ... if it was a goody two shoes then i would say this setup is justified... but with his experience and livelihood his behavior literally says it's bs... no offense to the author... it's good but it's just not for me... keep up the good work... I enjoyed the unique concept... but you character creation ruined it for me... anyway do your best... good luck...đđ
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