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I must say I'm disappointed. It started off okay mc having to unlock the blacklight okay getting stronger all okay till you nerfed the mc taking away his power. so review Writing quality- Nothing to complain about a mistake here and their but its readable. Stability of updates- Not much to say a good amount for a average author doing this for fun. Story development- They had in the beginning an okay set up sure they don't show much but it was fine and we had an op mc but then out of nowhere because of the bs reason of the R.O.B losing a bet he gets nerfed losing powers and things, This is the worst thing you can do in a story epically one focused on an op mc as not does it kill development if not done properly it makes readers drop as they feel that if the author would nerf the mc once with a bs reason why would they not fall back into bad planning and do it again. Character design- Not the best but its average for a op fanfic story. World Background- This is just not good first they introduce a sky high style school in a dc marvel mix with no canon characters then forget about it then throw us into deskside and dc with marvel only being slightly mentioned in all creating a mess. So in all if you enjoy seeing an authors bad planning and foresight f up an novel by nerfing their op mc with a bs reason (it would be fine if it was a good well developed reason but its not) Then go for it if not stay away.

From Zero to Hero: With the black light Virus

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zero_m
zero_mLv1zero_m

Darkside*

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try the story again, you might like the direction its heading in

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Don't know how many might chance upon this reply, But I express my most sincere apology for this absolute train reck of a review. Abundant grammatical errors and typos nearly to the level of an MTL novel and it's appalling. Sincerely: Zero