I enjoy this. It's a fresh approach to the Naruto-verse, I found myself emerged in this world. All that said, I have a huge complaint: The grammar in this Novel is the worst I have ever seen. MC's name is spelt differently, verbal modes aren't coherent. Sometimes the most basic or words is spelt with an extra letter. All this could have been avoided if you did a spell check on Gramarly.com or something. Please improve your writing in this sense . Don't take this as hate, I'll still read any continuations you write to the story but, this is holding you down
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