Review Detail of Carlos_Balbizan in The Mech Lord

it's a really interesting plot but very poorly applied in the initial question, even if it's better than 80% of this site it's still very DRAMATIC and when I say a lot I mean it's boring to read... full of drama and mystery initially where the story should being introduced first makes everything boring and confusing, especially where you say in the tags that it's about romance, action and comedy