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Legacy_24
Legacy_24Lv142yrLegacy_24

I don’t even know where to begin with how bad this is. The chapters are super super short, the grammar is terrible but the execution is the worst. Chakra of the 10 tails at 5? Shadow clones without being taught by anyone at 5? Teaching a five year old the chakra techniques necessary for Rasengan as a way to learn at 5? I am sorry I got super excited by the title and thought this could be a really cool story but yeesh its terrible.

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Reborn as Uchiha Hyuga

jayden_darkside

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jayden_darkside
jayden_darksideAuthorjayden_darkside

look dude I write for fun and I like my book I don't care if you don't like it i simply I write because I'm bored so please go read something don't make hate comment like this just say this is bad a move on .

Lag_Overloaded:I think the god has put that kid under genjutsu 😂😂😂
Ezukejyll
EzukejyllLv6Ezukejyll

Dude there has been 2 other novels titled the same way back in the day and within 2-3 chapters you could tell how bad it was going to be. Reading this title and knowing from experience just how bad it was with the other two did not dissuade my opinion on ever reading this.

Legacy_24
Legacy_24Lv14Legacy_24

Well thats upsetting would it hurt for a really good Naruto fan fic to be released? They are few and very f****g far between

Ezukejyll:Dude there has been 2 other novels titled the same way back in the day and within 2-3 chapters you could tell how bad it was going to be. Reading this title and knowing from experience just how bad it was with the other two did not dissuade my opinion on ever reading this.
jayden_darkside
jayden_darksideAuthorjayden_darkside

Look dude this is my first book and I write as a hobby if you don't like the book then read another one i don't care second of all im a young writer and I write for fun

jayden_darkside
jayden_darksideAuthorjayden_darkside

dude I write for fun and if you don't like it read something else I care 0

Ezukejyll:Dude there has been 2 other novels titled the same way back in the day and within 2-3 chapters you could tell how bad it was going to be. Reading this title and knowing from experience just how bad it was with the other two did not dissuade my opinion on ever reading this.
Ezukejyll
EzukejyllLv6Ezukejyll

No problem. Went and found more to read. Good luck on your story though.

jayden_darkside:dude I write for fun and if you don't like it read something else I care 0
jayden_darkside
jayden_darksideAuthorjayden_darkside

okay good for you , hope you enjoy the other book :)

Ezukejyll:No problem. Went and found more to read. Good luck on your story though.
Lag_Overloaded
Lag_OverloadedLv4Lag_Overloaded

I think the god has put that kid under genjutsu 😂😂😂