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Review Detail of Fachi in The Cursed Gamer

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Fachi
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It's not good, but since the author has made me read it for so long I will give him one extra star. I will keep this quick. Maybe. The characters are just retarded, like people say that wuxia characters are always made stupider than the protagonist but this is just ridiculous. I suppose the characters are okay, they're just boring after their arc is over. The story is hella boring and makes zero sense. So to add artificial conflict the MC needs to kill the omniverses' strongest beings, very realistic. And SOMEHOW, the OMNIVERSE is unable to stop some curse, done by a single guy, fully and 5% of it is bled through. But don't worry, because that literally doesn't matter, the fact that he can't use mana doesn't change a single thing about the story, he still uses quirks. Besides, no mana? This is MHA, there isn't any magic, and any quirks like that use stamina since there are no magical forces and everything is based off of genetics. The action an smut. They are just garbage. The action is described so poorly so you have no clue what's going on, and besides the power scaling makes zero sense. He beat Muscular, and later when he is much stronger he says, "I wonder if I can beat Muscular now?". Like what? There is no tension when something stressful happens either, and it's to the point where it is actually cringy, not to cringe at the character, but cringy that the author wrote it in the story. Like we have the classic 'close to death scene', where the MC is close to death but pulls it off. So what happens is he is getting absolutely destroyed, and he is 1hp AND bleeding, but he somehow wins and THEN heals. The only ''good'' parts about the action scenes is when he shows off some ability and all the weebs in the audience cream themselves, but too bad because the author probably nerfed that ability to all hell. A bad thing about that whole goal of being the strongest omniversal being in ~30-50 years is that it means that he should be the strongest person in MHA in like.... 20 chapters? And it's even more ridiculous when he could be grinding to get stronger but he literally does nothing all day. There was a time when he told someone, kind of off handedly, about how he needs to work hard or everyone around him is going to die. But it's like... what bro? You literally don't work hard at all, this is the only story where I genuinely feel like the character doesn't deserve his abilities. And I read a ton of garbage novels so that is really saying something. The smut is basically nonexistent, it was there for a bit, but despite it being a story that should be like ~30% smut there is way too little. So no good plot; no good smut, if any at all; an annoying main character; eventually irrelevant supporting characters; and bad action. This is a real bad look going on here. The one good thing I can give is the fact that he does have some original ideas, not great ideas, in fact I would prefer normal canon plot, but original ideas non-the-less . Semi Spoilers but it won't impact the plot, just appearance, maybe personality, and something like his quirk. I might be a little mean, I ranted about the author a little bit. He also made the character look like Gojo but that's it. He doesn't have Six Eyes (He has another eye power, too bad it's nerfed to all hell), Infinity, personality traits, or his dope outfit. So he just does it half way, kind of disappointing, no, very disappointing. He is in the Hado family and has Nejire's quirk (who somehow awakens her ability at a very similar time to him despite the fact that he SHOULD have used it hundreds or even thousands of times longer than she has. But who knows maybe it's a side product of the fact that he doesn't do anything. Or maybe the author realized that he drastically limited the harem's growth and decided, "screw it") Genuinely disappointed in the author's laziness, all he needs to do is at least SAY he grinded a little, and it's not even that, it's the little things, abbreviations, something, example, etc. I only remembered the abbreviations thing but there are definitely more things you can pick up if you read it. But I wouldn't suggest that. I actually pinky promise you, the strongest of promises, that you might think it gets better, but it doesn't, maybe it will at chapter 200, but I don't have any faith that webnovel authors can really improve. Delete this and I will sweat to keep this up. I suggest you take this as simple constructive criticism, I have nothing against you, I'm just pessimistic so it's a lot easier for me (or maybe everyone) to explain what I dislike.

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