Review Detail of Luminous_Arcadian in The Abyss of the Vampire - Demon

It's a good story, and I really like how it starts off with the synopsis. The plotline was well-thought, and the characterization was good. The story's development was fast-paced, and the descriptions were quite vague. I think it would be better if the scenes would progress a tad bit slower so it'll be easier for the readers to digest, and the story would flow much smoother. Overall, it was a great story.