Review Detail of Retr09007 in IDLE Database

3 chapters in and we are getting a lot of info-dumping. The grammar and spelling are pretty good and there is no problem there but the story already seems like its stagnating. There are a lot of words but they don't really give anything to the story and it just feels like wasted space. Some details could be squished down into one paragraph but it seems like the author extended it into multiple. I love the concept and the setup but if Im already getting annoyed at the unnecessary info now then I doubt i could take it later on.