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nurilucas
nurilucasLv42yrnurilucas

The plot is quite good for me. I even added this to my library. However, what's with the translation? Is this a translation made by a machine? While reading, I can't help but edit the grammar inside my head. I mean, seriously? I think it's better to read the MTL version, if there is. The names, pronouns, and even the people who are talking inside the story as all mixed up. Please give justice to the story by fixing the basics. A good sentence structure gives life to even the most boring story. Those who love to read will surely relate. (This is just a constructive criticism. No offense meant) P.S. If you delete this, I'm going to post it again.

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The Tales of a Blessed Daughter

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luv2_read
luv2_readLv5luv2_read

raw name please

lilpriestess
lilpriestessLv14lilpriestess

Same. or do u know the real title so i can gO and mtl it lol