Review Detail of Asteria_Azizella in After Getting Abandoned, I Choose to Become the General’s Wife

The first 40 chapters were really good, story was developing, there was also relationship building involved, and the story was well paced. That's where the good things end, after chapter 40 it gets very, very lackluster. The story is all over the place, new characters are not even described (Li Tong), the story is all over the place, nothing is explained, a ton of time skips, not to mention children do not appear at all. Story that was about childcre, her wanting to change her relationship with her daughter and... in the end she barely even appears. Overall nice concept that gets you excited but the longer you read the more you realise how bad and lackluster it gets.