I WOULD HAVE LIKED THIS STORY/NOVEL IF NOT FOR THE CUTS. I NOTICED AFTER CHAPTER 14, IT LOOKS LIKE IT MISSED A CHAPTER. THEN, THE FLOW OF THE STORY IS MESSED UP. IT'S NO LONGER A SMOOTH SAILING BOAT BUT LIKE A PERSON ABRUPTLY PULLED FROM FANTASY TO REALITY THEN BACK AND FORTH. THE KIND OF BEING LED BY THE NOSE.
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