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Review Detail of Melibee in The Legend of the ruthless Empress Freya

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Melibee
MelibeeLv52yrMelibee

I really love the story so far and the characters. It's also cool that the system also became a characterr with a personality instead of just a tool without emotions. I also love the MC but I am still nit sure how to discribe her personality completely. I love that she is ruthless and doesn't forgive but there are still a few gabs. I know that she hates humans but I feel like she should not like destroy every human as she wouldn't be much better then them afterwards and some humans like children who maybe had a similar childhood like her also didn't choose to be humans and didn't really live much better then the demons or monsters as humans not only hurt and discriminate other races but also part of their own race who are different or poor. She is also apparently emotionless but didn't really seem like that up until now with her partly sadistic site and how she acts sometimes but I still don't really hate her character. Maybe we could see a more deskriptive personality of hers later on about how she acts from the outward perspective instead of only her mind. But maybe you also planned alread. for that to happen as she still wasn't really in contact with civilization. But all in all really good up until now and also not many grammar mistakes.šŸ‘ I'm sorry if I make some mistakes myself as english isn't my first language but it should be understandable enough I hope to know what I meanšŸ˜š

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The Legend of the ruthless Empress Freya

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LuciferSama
LuciferSamaAuthorLuciferSama

It's funny that you say that because I just consider herself as emotionless and hating humans but finally she knows how to show sides that nobody suspected (neither her nor the readers). At the moment her personality is quite blurred and it's done on purpose. The character will learn with time that it is indeed important to evaluate a person before judging him and it is also the role of her companions and future companions to guide her towards reflection rather than hate. Anyway, thanks for your comment, you can't imagine how much it relieves him to read your lines! Thank you! Author-san Lucifer!

LuciferSama
LuciferSamaAuthorLuciferSama

P.S: Yes there will be POVs of humans and other people about her ;)

Melibee
MelibeeLv5Melibee

UiišŸ˜šŸ˜‰

LuciferSama:P.S: Yes there will be POVs of humans and other people about her ;)
Melibee
MelibeeLv5Melibee

I will be looking forward to her futurešŸ˜†

LuciferSama:It's funny that you say that because I just consider herself as emotionless and hating humans but finally she knows how to show sides that nobody suspected (neither her nor the readers). At the moment her personality is quite blurred and it's done on purpose. The character will learn with time that it is indeed important to evaluate a person before judging him and it is also the role of her companions and future companions to guide her towards reflection rather than hate. Anyway, thanks for your comment, you can't imagine how much it relieves him to read your lines! Thank you! Author-san Lucifer!
LuciferSama
LuciferSamaAuthorLuciferSama

Soon you will be introduce to my favorite character so keep reading ā˜ŗļø Author-San Lucifer

Melibee:I will be looking forward to her futurešŸ˜†