Review Detail of Chookity_Pok in My split personalities and i Transmigrate into another world.

Item: My split personalities and i Transmigrate into another world.
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Chookity_PokAuthor2yrChookity_Pok

amateur writer looking for some feedback on the interaction between dabi and his brothers and any advice improving my writing thanks. ****English isn't my first language ***

My split personalities and i Transmigrate into another world.

Chookity_Pok

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RenseaLv14Rensea

I thought the interaction was good and seemed quite natural

2yr

Chookity_PokAuthorChookity_Pok

Thank you for the feed back was wondering if I could really pull of multiple personalities 🙂🙂

Rensea:I thought the interaction was good and seemed quite natural

2yr