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Alison is an architect single mom who's raising her young daughter Samantha when she met a new client named Leandro. Their story is a cautious one for romance. Wonder how Leandro reacts when he finds out about her daughter. Writing Quality. Punctuations and capital letters to appropriate words and sentences. Updating Stability. Consistent update. Story Development. Stable pace. Alison's encounter with Leandro in the elevator about being thrown in the wall and saved by him is a cliché first meeting but cute. Character Design. The characters were described accordingly. World Background. It's mentioned that they live and work in New York City. Although the pace is a bit slow, it flows good enough. Keep going!

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Alison's Second Chance At Love

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Thank you for leaving a review ❣️, and about the meeting at the elevator cliche😌. I could not help it🥰