Review Detail of sg_27 in Abandoned

Item: Abandoned
Rating: 2

Review detail

sg_27Lv12yrsg_27

The translation need some editing story development is a little wacky we have no information on what's happening the characters are a little.... weird world background well there is only 2 chapter so i can't say anything well overall it has some potential

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doomedtl

Liked it!

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doomedtlAuthordoomedtl

I'm intentionally keeping things mysterious. Could you elaborate on how the characters are weird? The story is written in English. I haven't translated it to any other language.

2yr