Review Detail of ShenDee90 in Evil Duke, Please Be Gentle!

Just ended read this 22th April, 2023 at 02.49 PM. 📖✔ The stories is quite good with some story development which is not easily guessed.. But, there are so many disappointed aspects also like some wrong grammars and confusing words like pursed lips or pursued lips words, palace or place words and another wrong used words, then there are also the he/she and other words which also used wrongs so many times, not to forget there are also some wrong and confusing aspects of characters naming placements that I remembered like Leo sometimes changed to Alex in some few mid chapters but then there's also Arden the aide of Leo later then changed to another name near the ends chapter, Raymond then to Reynold then the baron's daughter that tried to seduced Ethan that her name's changed for few times Vanessa then to Amber then changed again to another name Hazel, here I thought that's the name of Leo's real mother, oh also Jenna the maids also changed to Jenny in the chapters near the end, not to forget about Martin (Evangeline's childhood friend) that later also changed name to Peter in some of the chapters near the end. Oh there are also confusing story development that when the 1st bomb accident in the palace on chapter 609, Killed His Own Son where it's described that Andrew is the one that fatally wounded that Leo the one that luckily only a bit wounded is the one that a bit panicked then helped by pick Andrew up to the physician but then later after the wrong chapters of another story of Len, Luci, Chris, kids & siblings, Alex, Oli and so on that haven't mentioned before (that's obviously unrelated because wrong posted chapters that unexplained) then after that the story goes to explained that it's Leo that fatally wounded then it's getting healed by Renee's tears.. Yes, there are some chapters that also wrong to posted that unrelated to the stories here that at first there's an explanation on the title chapters but later on near the ends it's unexplained but, then there's also some repeated chapters with different title chapters. Then at the end of the chapters when it told us the story is completed but, suddenly in the chapters of 626 the story's an abrupt stop that there are still so many things that haven't explained like where's Ethan go after receiving Renee tears..? Where's Leo went to half an hour before Andrew, Theo and the knights of Thawynes killed the greedy Emperor then what about Leo's real mother and his cousin..? Also there's some mysteries surrounding the counselor and the assistant on the carriage that haven't explained well.. The ending is stop so abruptly and quite disappointing since the story itself is quite good and promising. Anyway, in earlier chapters there's information of Volume 2 of this story but the in later chapters until the end there's no more information of the story continuation of Volume 2 but, then I just hope the author can make a better explanations and better story development of the volume 2 of Evil Father of Renee with more few wrong grammars and few confusing of he/she placement words of the story also please not another changed name of characters since it's confusing the readers. At last but not least, of course we need a happy ending closure if possible of Thawynes family especially Leo & Evan with Renata and then also with William, their father and the siblings of Ethan & Hannah with their son, Elizabeth & Andrew, Eve & Chris then oh yes with their friends like Arden & Olivia, Aunt Martha, Martin, Carl & family, Theo and the head maids, Jenna and others. By the way, thanks for the story author, here we're hoping for another more promising story with better and stabilize story development of yours. 👍