Well.. Story was interesting.. Worldbuilding was great.. MC and other character was realisticaly good.. I dont know how yo put it in the word.. But this comfortable and not cliche.. I dont know how you put it but that was marvelous.. I hope the MC not overpowered.. And still have rival or enemy with the same tier power.. Apex OP MC was not good idea in game genre.. But that good idea if you got want some face slapping.. Im not usually put review in story cause.. But i just say you got one reader here now.. hope you make this story enjoyable.. And have a nice day..
HollowShade
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