Review Detail of MrHollow in Transcended as Lord Buggy

I really like the work and recommend reading it. The only thing that's bugging me is the writing quality. there's a lot of grammatical error's. It's not that you can't understand what it's saying like in bad English translating of chinese novels, but it could be better Writing Quality: 3/5. Stability of Updates: can't say as it's only the start of the book. Story Development: 5/5 Character Design: I can't really say as it's only the start of the book World Background: 5/5 (it's one piece you know, so he doesn't really need to make something up.)