At first, I really liked the story, it has a slow development which allows greater setting and development of characters without exaggerating too much in the descriptions and, although the protagonist is powerful is not to the point of completely overshadowing everyone else giving a good content. However, the only thing that confused me is that the current cover doesn't relate to the story yet. In addition, due to the history of the index, I have a regular post of chapters, and I gave a note a little lower in world development because so far there hasn't been much since the mc hasn't left its "initial environment". As for the grammar, I have no idea if it's correct or not because my native language is not English and I depend on Google translator - through this tool everything is apparently readable for me.
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LIKEThank you for the review! My grammar had been improving a lot even though you may not see it, but im happy it's readable. I'm planning on changing the cover to something that represents the mc. The cover, even though it was taken from reddit, does relate to the story later on. Not to spoil much but one of the main plot points will include a lich.